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Beachfront Lunch

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B-Bry's view
J-Jagar's view


B-It was a nice summer day down by the beach. I decided to take a boat out and do a little fishing, so after gathering my gears, lunch, etc. I rented a boat and headed out to sea, but not too far that I don't see the shore line. Little did I know that I would end up catching more than I bargained for.

J-Deep under the water's surface, a set of green eyes poked from the shadows to look at the boat that drove by. The eyes belonged to a young, green merman who was about 53 feet long from the tip of his green head to the tip of his green tail. The only thing not green was most of his upper torso and most of his face, which smiled as he got a better look at the owner of the boat. He followed the boat until it stopped and anchored itself down and saw a small line fall into the ocean. He figured that the young girl was fishing and got an idea. After a few moments, the merman tugged on the string abit just to get started before really pulling so she would fall into the ocean, then gave her feet a lick to taste her and to frighten her abit before lifting her up with his hand.

B-After I felt I was in a good spot I set my line in and waited. I then felt a tug on my line and pulled. It became a tug of war until I felt a pull so strong that I fell off my boat and into the ocean. Luckily I had a life jacket on to keep me afloat. I squealed when I felt something wet move against my feet. And then I felt myself getting higher and soon looked behind me to see a set of green eyes looking right at me.

J-"Hello there little one." the merman said to the young woman.

B-"Hello. Who are you?" I asked nicely despite my growing fear.

J-"My name's Jagar. What's your name, my dear?" Jagar asked nicely with a cute smile.

B-"My name's Bryane, but many call me Bry for short." I said, hoping that he's just being friendly.

J-"Bry? That's a cute name. So what brings you out here on this nice day?" Jagar asked.

B-"I just thought it would be nice to get some sun and do a little fishing" I said, can't help feeling a lump in my throat.

J-"That's nice. When I saw you out here I just thought you might like to join me for lunch." Jagar smiled.

B-"Well, I do have something but I don't know if it would help a tall man like you much." I said, unaware of his intentions.

J-"Oh I think I have something in mind" Jagar said his smile turning from cute to more sinister.

B-Seeing his smile change, I gulped hard and said "Like what?"

J-Licking his lips slowly, Jagar said "You of course." He played her right into his trap.

B-Realization hitting me hard, I jumped from his hand and into the ocean before making a swim to the shoreline, hoping to be out of his reach.

J-Seeing the girl jump from his hand and swimming to shore, Jagar just chuckled and swam slowly after her. He loved a good game of cat and mouse. When they were close to the shore, Jagar grabbed her and dragged her underwater before surfacing again. Licking his lips, Jagar said "Nice try, but I'm afraid you won't be going anywhere except here." Before placing his webbed hand onto his stomach.

B-Just as I was about to hit shore, I felt myself getting dragged underwater and thought I drown before surfacing again. After coughing up some water I saw my lower body wrapped in Jagar's webbed fingers and began to struggle to get out. I then said "Please don't eat me."

J-Mocked sympathy Jagar said "Aww, why not? I bet you would love it. It's soft and warm inside. Besides I don't think you have a choice in the matter."

B-"Please, I'm begging you. I don't wanna die such a horrible way." I begged some more.

J-Jagar taunted her by licking away her tears and to get a good taste of her before saying "But you taste so sweet. And it might not be as bad as you might think." He wasn't gonna kill her, but he enjoys toying with his prey, making them think they would be melted in his juices.

B-I continued struggling as Jagar licked me, tears running through my eyes and thinking of dying of a horrible painful way.

J-Jagar licked her one last time and said "If you don't wanna believe me that's fine. Just see for yourself." Licking his lips, Jagar placed Bry's feet into his mouth, suckling them before pushing them into his throat. After the first swallow, he slowly pushed her into his mouth, savoring every inch of her as she went pass his teeth. He felt such bliss from her taste and her struggles only added more to the pleasure. Little by little he swallowed her down until her head was all that was left. After a wink, he sucked her in, licking her around abit to toy with her before taking the last, fate sealing gulp. He felt her head going down with his fingers and purred with pleasure. As soon as she was deposited into his stomach, he layed on the beach rubbing his belly and licking his lips, getting every last taste of her from his mouth.

B-I screamed as I saw my feet disappeared into Jagar's mouth. I tried to use his grip on my body to get my feet out but his mouth had a grip on be as he swallowed my feet. I continued to scream, batted against his face and fist as more of me vanished into his maw. Soon all I could see was his teeth and the roof of his mouth before he closed them. I then felt his tongue moving around me to savor my taste. With every ounce of strength I had I tried to get myself out but his throat had a strong hold on me and my scream was muffled by his flesh as he took that gulped that sealed my fate. As I went down I felt something pushing against me. After what seemed like an eternity, I fell into a more open area and landed on the bottom. It didn't take me long to realize where I am and I banged on the walls screaming, "Let me out"

J-Enjoying her screams and her struggles, Jagar said "Awww, so soon? But you feel so good inside there. I did enjoy our lunch, you were so delicious." Licking his lips to get the taste and to mock her, he the dove into the ocean and swam to his home. He doesn't like to hurt people but a full belly is always welcome. He will let her out and explain but for now he would enjoy every second of her struggles until she decides to give up.
B-Hurt by his mock I cursed him until I felt everything move and then a cool sensation. I realized he must be swimming away from the shores and began to think that this was it. I couldn't believe that I was gonna die this way; I had so much to live for. After another barrage of kicks, scratches and screams I gave up. All I could do was curl into a ball and hope I die before the juices get me.
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Awwww, that was great. X3 Jager would totally act like that too. XD

Loved it! Hope you write more! X3